求職文件修改

求職文件修改

求職文件修改


小改: 針對句子、標點符號、語法的正確性,調整名詞大、小寫和單

字詞性(形容詞、動詞或名詞)。


大改: 小改外,並簡化、合併或改寫文句,確保時態、句子對稱,

加上必要轉折、連接詞,並替換恰當字詞。(強力推薦!!!)


履歷修改示範


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Gigi Tan (譚綦琪)

45 Downing Street, Taipei

Phone: 02 6666 6666; Cell: 0900 111 222

Email: gigitan@hotmama.com

OBJECTIVE:

Seeking a challenging position as an Office Manager with an international company.

QUALITIES:

1. Has worked as a secretary to General Manager for several years.

2. Can peak in English and Japanese.

3. A people person, team spirited with great writing and speaking skills.

4. Work hard, independent, and can handle overtime and pressure.

5. Good at PowerPoint and spreadsheets programs.

6. Typing English and Chinese very fast.

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Gigi Tan (譚綦琪)

45 Downing Street, Taipei

Phone: 02 6666 6666; Cell: 0900 111 222

Email: gigitan@hotmama.com

__________HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATIONS_________

Detailed-oriented Office Administrator with back-office support, event planning and coordination, and information management experience.

  • Expert Computer Skills in the creation of PowerPoint files and spreadsheets.

  • Certified Typing speed of 90 wpm in English and Chinese.

  • Excellent Interpersonal Skills; fluent in both spoken and written English and Japanese.

  • Able to work well within a team environment; capable of working under tight deadlines.

  • Accustomed to fast-paced, high-pressured positions.

寫作診斷

  • 組織 — 很好的架構,建議省略”OBJECTIVE”,過時寫法。

  • 說服力 – 個人技能、知識必須結合用人條件(粗體字部份)。

  • 可讀性 — 條列項目寫法需一致,採名詞或形容詞片語。


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EXPERIENCE:

2012 – Present La Sun Enterprise, Taipei

Administrative Assistant

1. Dealing with staff’s administrative requests.

2. Provide telephone connection services.

3. In charge of office supplies and equipment.

4. Greet and host incoming guests when management is busy.

5. Planning meetings and business trips for management.

6. Setting up board meetings and dinner functions at management instruction.

7. Renew information on the company’s advertising and newsletters.

2011 – 2012 Bimoto Chemicals, Inc., Taipei

Administrative Assistant

1. Handling client appointments for management.

2. Dealing with incoming telephone calls.

3. Handling the internal and external mail.

4. Organizing all client files and details.

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___________________EXPERIENCE____________________

EXECUTIVE ADMIN SUPPORT 2011 – Present

La Sun Enterprise, Taipei

Pinto Chemicals, Inc., Taipei

Provide wide ranges of administrative functions for management:

  • Analyze and organize office procedures, such as bookkeeping and clerical services.

  • Answer staff inquiries and advise personnel on administrative matters.

  • Schedule meetings, events and dinner functions when required.

  • Answer incoming calls and make appointments.

  • Manage internal and external written and spoken communication.

  • Supply and maintain office suppliers and equipment.

寫作診斷

  • 組織 — 原來的架構突顯每份工作時間很短,改依工作性質編寫。

  • 說服力 — 最好用數字呈現績效、成果、貢獻度。

  • 可讀性 — 動詞 +受詞是主要句子結構,注意時態轉換。

價格

大改

小改

履歷、求職信、自傳(500字限)

2.5 元/字

1.0 元/字

About the Author

游志林 -- 英文智庫主編、工研院產經中心英文編修師、東吳大學推廣英語講師、北一區教育資源中心英文作文批改師。