商務寫作常見句子問題 – 2

商務寫作常見句子問題 – 2

d. 時態的問題

問題句:   He called the supplier and complains about the wrong delivery.

修改:       He called the supplier and complained about the wrong delivery.

e. 可數與不可數名詞、冠詞的混淆

問題句-1: We need some informations about your products.

修改:         We need some information about your products.

問題句-2: Thank you for product information you sent us.

修改:         Thank you for the product information you sent us.

f. 句中所連結的項目詞性不一致

問題句-1: Our products are better in design, quality, and we have a selection of them.

修改:         Our products are better in design, quality, and selection.

問題句-2: Let me know when to get to the trade center and its direction.

修改-1:     Let me know when to get to the trade center and how to get there.

修改-2:     Let me know when and how to get to the trade center.

g. 不完整的句子

問題句-1: This morning’s meeting rescheduled to next Monday.

修改-1:     This morning’s meeting has been rescheduled to next Monday.

問題句-2: I was sick yesterday I missed some work. (兩個句子)

修改-1:     I was sick yesterday. I missed some work. (分兩句)

修改-2:     I was sick yesterday, and I missed some work. (用 ’and’ 連接)

修改-3:    I missed some work because I was sick yesterday.

問題句-3: Our company knows everybody doesn’t like the order is cancelled happen. (台式英文)

修改-1:     We understand that you are not happy about our canceling your order.

修改-2:     Unfortunately, we are forced to cancel your order.

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